Deluge and Thunder

Injury hangs like weighted shrouds,

cloaked, hoarded,

maintained, worshipped in secret.

Curtains drawn down in defiance with darkness.

Injury materializes through years.

Through mother’s milk,

Through father’s shaky hand.

It transcends generation . . .

Sticking its nose in

Where everyone has forgotten

Injury needs a summit,

A reckoning. It needs

To be reopened, stitches torn

A gash here, a breach there,

A gnashing of teeth and snarl.

Injury needs to bleed its bile,

needs to scour its wound with pumice stone.

To lie in the stifling air, to desiccate,

to be picked to the bone.

It needs to feel the deluge and the thunder.

But we, we keep it nice.

Smile when spoken to.

Swallow the raging vomit.

Keep the curtains closed and drawn.

Inflict more damage to

our collective entrails

And weep alone, in bitterest darkness.

9 thoughts on “Deluge and Thunder”

  1. Very moving poem Carrie.
    I feel the pain in it.
    Interesting to note: I just finished a story called, “Tell Me Where It Hurts.”
    Will forward to you when fully edited.
    Love,
    O.

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  2. WOW! Carrie–this is a powerful, brutal poem. And then the turn…what we need and what we don’t do. What we’ve been so carefully taught to not do/say/feel/be. Thank you.

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