Mojave Memoir

Sept 26 021


Mojave Memoir

            The red dirt was too heavy and hot to make much dust as we jiggled and jounced our way into the camping spot.  Blistering, unrelenting, dangerous heat.  One hundred and fifteen degrees. The car’s temperature gauge crept up to warning levels.  Jagged red and orange sandstone escarpments loomed above, our saviors, because when the sun began to set, the crags would swathe us in blessed, life-saving shade.  A fifteen inch desert iguana climbed the creosote bush next to the car and began his threatening pushups; this was his territory and he wasn’t prepared to share.  Jumping cholla, beavertail and barrel cactus seemed to lean toward us, thirsty and treacherous.  My sister and I slowly emerged from the cool safety of our car.  Forty  camping spots in Hole in the Wall Campground and only one was inhabited, ours.

The wind whipped our hair and lashed our faces, sucking the last moisture from our skin.  We went to the back of the little teardrop trailer and opened the galley to gulp some water.  The water was hot.  This campground was hot.  Hot like the surface of the sun, hot like the scorched earth, hot like a blast-furnace wind, hot like charred flesh.   We opened the doors on the trailer to let the gusts howl through, deluding ourselves that such violent air would make it tolerable inside.  How could anything survive here?

The sun lowered in the sky and shadows, taunted us, and brought none of the expected relief.  The wind raged.  We desperately shed our clothes – down to bras and underwear – stripped of our modesty by the desert inferno.  We could have danced naked in the desert night and no one would care, because no one was there.   The visitor’s center, off in the distance, was closed for the season, no use to an empty park.  Off in the cactus, we heard the rattle of snake-imitating insects, syncopation to the rhythm of the gusts. No light, just stars and stars and more stars.  The Milky Way streaked across the sky.  The earth, like a celestial oven, baked the life out of its anxious inhabitants.

We lay on our backs in our trailer, the doors open, playing word games to distract from the heat and conquer our increasing primal fear.  There was very little between us and death out there.  No one knew where we were, no cell service, no one to come to the rescue.  We were increasingly aware that diminished supplies, questionable equipment, and our own intelligence and physical strength tentatively held nature back from our destruction.

We finally drifted off to gentle sleep, then snapped awake – a sound…not a natural sound, but familiar, out of place – the sound of an engine.  We peered into the night and one tiny set of headlights slowly, slowly grew closer, bigger, brighter, fading the stars.  The lights approached the thirty-nine empty camping spots; we wiggled into a few more clothes.  The lights kept coming, the sound of the engine louder despite the wind:  a dark, windowless van – closer and closer.  It entered the campground and the lights flew up and down on the rutted road.  Slowly, slowly, the van drove to the far side of the campground, but didn’t stop.  It kept moving, following the circular campground path.  It drove at the pace of a desert turtle, stopping to look at each individual campsite, rejecting one-by-one. Thirty-nine empty spots, and the driver, whoever he was, came to a halt in the spot right next to us, separated by no more than ten feet. The engine shut off and we could hear it tick.  Furtively, we moved door latches into place and silently shut the windows.  As the wind howled, we huddled, locked in our tiny metal trailer, sweat soaked the sheets and pillows and we passed minute by minute on full alert.  Not a sound came from the van: no light, no voices, no opening of van doors.  Nothing.  No sleep that night, as the dangers of the desert dried to dust, no fear greater than the fear of our own species.


Blog #5

Canine Octelle



My pack watches, five tails beat

Ten eyes eager, twenty feet.

Five dogs barking, howling deep

Neighbors fleeing, vet bills steep

Scorn I see from many face

My poor vacuum can’t keep pace

Five sweet tongues lick, pant and bark

Snuggle close now, in the dark

My pack watches, five tails beat

Ten eyes eager, twenty feet.


(Octelle is an eight line poem with rhyme scheme aabbccddaa.  The rhythm is 88777788.  The first two lines repeat at the end.  Obviously, I didn’t strictly adhere to the form.)

Blog #4


My friend Angela was murdered in July, 2017 this is in her honor.


I’m not ready to say goodbye.  Thoughts of you whirl around, while I hike, lift one leg after another.  Yours can’t do that now.   You don’t see the scarlet tanager feed her fledgling.  You can’t inhale the incense cedar or delight in the shock of cold water in the Stuart River.  These ‘pleasures of the flesh’ moments that tick by, they validate life worth living. You’ve used your last second.

I visit your final moment, imagine it, obsess on it.  JB is here with me now, your old Bassett hound.  He makes me laugh, his comical body.  My neighbor thought we had adopted a seal, his bay is so strange. I wonder what he saw that night, what he did, what he knows. Did he try to help you?  Did he try to save you?  Trapped in his old, impossible body, did he do his best?  And did I? Did I push you hard enough, did I let convention and fear of impolite trespass stop me from insisting, from forcing you to act?  You said you were afraid.  That should have been enough.  That should have been the line I had to cross.  I comfort myself by saying, “No one could imagine that, no one could predict something so contrary to nature.”

But the world is full of proof.  Proof that the little hands created in our wombs can turn against us.  That darling, golden boy, ringlets and beautiful eyes, the little mouth that sucked at your breast and flapped his arms in delight when you entered the room – he became the devil, he made you afraid.  He slammed the doors, he stole your money, he refused to grow, to take flight, to leave.  Some broken wing in him brought him to that moment, to the second he picked up the knives and lunged; JB, a silent Bassett witness. How could that boy look into your gentle eyes, your fear, your small body and be filled with such anger, such vile violence.  How did it feel as the knife cut, the wounds adding up, one deadly cut after another, a slice here, an attack there, fifteen in all, from those hands your body created? Then your beautiful boy, your flesh, deserted you, as life pulsed from you.  JB by your side, I imagine him snuggling up, instinctively knowing, as that smell of death filled his nose.

And here we are, all left with nothing but milestones.  Last time I did this, I was with Angela.  Last time I had this wine…last time I heard this music, last time I talked to you… those pleasures of the flesh moments, the stream, the tanager, the cedar, are now diminished and filled with grief and regret – part of this life, my life. I’ll take care of JB for you, that is all I can think to do.

James Z Burks

James Z Burks

Blog #3


Carrie’s Blog

Hello Friends and Family,

Here I will post my writing: prose and poetry.  It is a little terrifying to think it will no longer be hidden away on my hard-drive or in a notebook squirreled in an obscure cupboard.  I am taking the leap to go public, to add my scribblings to the electronic world.  Please read and comment as you wish.

I love to dabble in specific forms of poetry and when I include those, I will add a note about the form and it’s requirements.  Feel free to join my and add yours.