My pack watches, five tails beat
Ten eyes eager, twenty feet.
Five dogs barking, howling deep
Neighbors fleeing, vet bills steep
Scorn I see from many face
My poor vacuum can’t keep pace
Five sweet tongues lick, pant and bark
Snuggle close now, in the dark
My pack watches, five tails beat
Ten eyes eager, twenty feet.
(Octelle is an eight line poem with rhyme scheme aabbccddaa. The rhythm is 88777788. The first two lines repeat at the end. Obviously, I didn’t strictly adhere to the form.)
Blog #4
Just Carrie 
Oh I can see it so clearly! Love this!
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Me gusta.
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I love this! Charlie will like it too!
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Hi Everyone,
I fixed the poem with better math…Lol.
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Will it be easier or more difficult if the number is six instead of five?
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Put a huge smile on my face! Love your pack pic too! XO
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